2015考研[微博]英语结束了,一场没有硝烟的战争就此打响了。今年的作文主题依然在预测之中,没有偏离大众视线,依然围绕社会热点展开。总体上来说,2015年这篇作文题目属于难度适中,很好完成。图片内容浅显易懂,不会偏离主题,是我们所熟悉的社会热点类话题之一;图片主题与我们日常生活密切相关,是大家相对比较熟悉的题材。大作文的主题是“手机时代的聚会”,我们课堂上延伸过,且属于最后预测话题范畴。

  城市交通

  此篇作文题目是一幅图片,亲戚朋友聚会,在一起没有交流,却都看着手机,发着微博,这是一种普遍的社会现象,同时也揭示科技带来的潜在威胁。题材可以说是中规中矩,词类热点话题在2010年考查形式是“手机入网”,在2011年中考[微博]查形式是“网络的近与远”考研英语中都有所涉猎,而这次的“手机时代的聚会”的话题依然属于这个话题范畴。出考研(英语一)大作文在相关题材考题的重复性体现了题材的重要性。此类作文可以从利弊角度进行分析,可以从意义对比进行分析,只要能自圆其说,得分还是很容易的。

  How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a
terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy
that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street. Anxious
passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the
street is filled with too many private cars。

  这篇文章的写法仍然建议三段式:

  Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With
the number of private cars increasing, traffic jams in metropolitans are
bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring
much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the
environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance
in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do
nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted
on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars has
increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which
has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

  第一段:描述图片。依照精英课堂给同学们提供的模板可以很好的套用。在描述图片时,大家要注意细节描写,这是得分一大亮点;其次,在首段最后一句点出文章的主题,也就是图片题目“手机时代的聚会”的隐身寓意。

  Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the
traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars should
be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public
transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon
transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can
have a smooth transportation。

  第二段:这篇文章可以从利弊分析角度入手。手机即科技,那科技给我们带来了什么呢?可以从这个角度:科技是一把双刃剑,既给我们带来无限的可能,也带来了很多的隐患。可分别论述优缺点,也可以对于缺点进行重点论述。

  、

  第三段:最后进行总结,进行论述,再次点题。比如对于这种缺点社会现实,就可以用老师给大家准备的标准句型进行作答–Considering
all the points discussed, it is highly sensible thatwe should take
prompt measures to resolve this problem. In the first place,more …
should be brought forward. In the second,… should be applied in
allcommunities. Only by enforcing these measures, can we effectively,
efficiently,and eventually solve the problem.
总之,一篇好的文章是内容、结构、语言组成的,语言是最重要的,即闪光句型、词汇。在保证主题正确的情况下,如果我们能做到句子词语选择更贴切,那么我们的作文成绩将更上一层楼!(高静)

  人生处处面临选择

  范文1:  

  This simple picture represents a situation that every person must
face:

  when approaching a junction, which direction should one
choose?   

  Most viewers can empathize with the sense of hesitation and
uncertainty embodied in such an image. Without exception, everyone has
to make choices in life, whether they concern school, career, or love.
While some choices are simple, one cannot avoid the task of making
difficult decisions.  

  Choices are often directly related to one’s happiness. University
students, for example, face a hard and crucial decision upon graduating.
Many students have difficulty deciding whether to continue studying or
begin developing a career. Every individual is different, and one must
take the factors of one’s personal life into consideration. In addition
to an awareness of specific circumstances, however, making the right
choice also depends on correct appraisal of oneself。

  In order to choose correctly, therefore, one must be both realistic
and self aware. Furthermore, once having made a decision, one should
seriously accept and pursue the path one has chosen, and strive towards
the realization of one’s goal with spirit。

  范文2: In the picture we can see a man standing at a crossroad
with two similar roads, and trying to decide which way to take. In daily
life we are often faced with such choices. More often than not, we have
to make cardinal decisions independently. This moment is very important
for everyone to go through.  

  In order to make a decision that we will not regret, we should bear
these two principles in mind: thinking before acting, and never missing
any opportunities that arise. On one hand, we should have an apparent,
objective judgment about ourselves while maintaining a clear idea about
the world around us. On the other hand, we should also think about
opportunity. Many people may not quite agree with this and think that
opportunity is so rare that only the luckiest people come across it.
However, opportunity is open to everyone and one should make good use of
it when confronted with it. One should take advantage of it just like
the proverb states: “Opportunities are only from the prepared minds。”

  So when one is faced with choices the next time, remember that using
the mind and taking advantage of good opportunities will pave the way to
success。

  人生成功

  What is success? Different people hold different views on this
question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal
of money. Others argue that success means holding an important
government post. Still others believe that whoever has got a high
academic title is successful. It is clear that there are quite different
opinions on success。

  In order to become successful, you should first of all be both
perseverant and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are
always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you
should never lose heart. On the contrary, you must build up your
confidence and work even harder. You should always keep in mind that
perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In
addition, you should pay great attention to you work method. It is
necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the
efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along
well with you co-workers, care for each other and help each other. If
you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable
success in the future。

  In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one’s
work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of
the country and bringing happiness to the people。

  人生没有笔直的路

  范文1:  

  In the black and white drawing above, a youth gravely contemplates a
narrow winding path heading into a forest. Perhaps he thinks that his
own future may be much like this path; full of bends and curves, thorns
and traps. The road to success is never anything but uneven and
difficult.  

  In fact, one could even say that the more successful one’s life is,
the more problems and hardships one must have overcome. The ability to
work through difficult situations and unfortunate events only makes one
stronger and more capable. Given that the road to happiness always
contains obstacles and setbacks, we should be well prepared for the
hardships that life inevitably brings, and abandon the idea that life is
smooth or easy. We must accept the fact that failures are unavoidable,
whether they are failures in examinations, in finding a job, or carrying
out a task. People who accept that their life will not always be simple
or calm are better able to handle problems when they arise. Those who
are upset by each and every small setback — and there are many people
with such attitudes— do not have much potential. Failure is mother to
success as it can strengthen one’s will. Those who can draw lessons from
failure are destined for success。

  范文2:  

  It is everyone’s wish to have things go their way. Yet the journey
through life is not always the case and we should be prepared for the
twists and turns it offers us. This is certainly the case as shown in
the cartoon.  

  Twists and turns are a part of life and setbacks often happen. For
many reasons, we often have to encounter failure in a complex society.
No one can avoid or escape these unexpected changes in our daily lives;
however, failure may be a route toward success. This causes us to
reflect about what happened and as a result we build up and accumulate
experience. We are then more likely to come up with a possible solution,
and so twists and turns can turn into treasures. Edison, for instance,
the inventor of the electric light bulb, made hundreds of models that
failed before he came up with the right one. In general it is failure
that encourages us to work harder which eventually leads to success.  

  Twists and turns in life are unavoidable and are not always bad. We
should have a more optimistic view on life and try to make the most of
it and draw lessons from the bumps and turns along the way。

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