2015年的考生大家好,英文考试已经落下了帷幕,下面我们一起来做一下英文考试的点评,其实这次阅读理解是有所上升的,首先来说一下我们的写作部分,这次的写作基本上跟我们课堂所讲的内容是保持一致的,大家如果把这本书上关于科技的文章好好记一下的话,应该发现这次的写作非常顺手的表达出来,这次我们英文一的作文hosta
club reading
session是要求大家写一个,算是一个邮件,但是邮件的写作方式跟我们书信是保持一致的,你要举行一个俱乐部要有一个读书会,现在请你给所有的会员推荐一本书,然后需要解释一下你推荐的原因是什么,然后请你清楚的写在我们的答题卡上面,要求大家写一百个单词,最后用的名字是李宁,你会发现整个书信是非常简单的,那么上面一定要记好的概念,第一就是格式问题非常重要,亲爱的,亲爱的因为是所有的会员,不能说sir
or madam,所有的会员应该说all the
members,应该说亲爱的所有的会员们。你发现所有的会员都认识,就没有必要再做一个自我介绍,做自我介绍也不受影响,后面写上我今天是来给你推荐一本书的,后面可以说推荐一本书的原因是什么,这里面介绍了英语的口语怎么练,英语的听力怎么练,都可以,这是特别常规的书信。第三可以说希望通过这本书能让你们对英语的有兴趣,最后署名就可以了,署名写上李宁就可以了,这封信应该来说难度上是比较简单的,但是一定要注意格式问题。

  城市交通

  好,这次大作文,第一个是个人品质,第二个是奉新爱心,第三个是科技对于生活的影响,第四个叫有意义的生活,餐桌前一帮人拿着手机,这帮人被手机所控制,这里面跟网络的语言语境有什么不同,你必须要说出来好处和坏处,但是你今天发现餐桌面前有四个人,每个人拿着手机他们并没有吃很丰盛的晚宴,他在讲手机对我们人与人之间沟通所带来的负面影响,应该写手机对我们生活带来了一些不好的影响,这篇文章由于话题特别的常见,所以想得到分并不是非常容易,想的到高分有两大卖点,有两个第一能够得到高分,第一个就是图片的描述问题,如果你在描述的直接就说四个人在玩手机,这样这个描述就会显得特别的单一,甚至可以说没有新意的地方,你们注意到桌子上面摆了四盘菜,写着手机时代的聚会,所以一定要把聚会给展示出来,因此在描绘图片的时候可以说面对晚宴上丰盛的晚餐,这些所有围坐在桌子周围的人他们无心品尝这些美食,而是被他们手机所吸引着,所以说你要把晚宴桌子上的东西展示出来,因此这个地方的描述可以采用分词做状语的形式,你可以说(英文),上面说面对这(英文),一个说面对着晚宴上所有丰盛的美食,然后可以说(英文)所有的人,(英文)在桌子的周围,然后后面说(英文),他们并没有去什么呢?用心去品尝这些美食,原因是因为他们被他们的手机所吸引,被什么东西所吸引可以说(英文),DISSTRACT,这个他们自己的手机(英文),这样的描述既生动而且能够把聚会这个展示出来,桌子上的美食也展示出来,这是第一个能得到高分的地方。第二段要写人们被手机所占据的原因是什么,很多人说现在手机比便捷信息比较快,但是这个原因不能够新老师,我给你提示几个原因,第一个为什么人们现在被手机所占据,我们在坐地铁的时候喜欢玩手机,我们平时在一起的时候两个夫妻在一起每个人都愿意拿出手机,现在人们越来越缺乏沟通的能力了,或者说这个理由还可以怎么说,你可以说人们越来越多的通过手机开始避免面对面的沟通了,这是第一个原因。第二个原因是人们忽略了在生活当中最重要的事情,沟通,然后把这个事情做有价值的事情,比方说这个事情有价值,运动、读书、旅游等等,人们观念上不是很正确,你的理由上必须应该很特殊,才有可能取到高分。第三就是如何去解决这个问题了,比方说第一个可以改变人们的观念,而且我们社会应该更好的正确的去引导他,那么这篇文章我估计大部分同学应该都不会写偏题,但是如果写手机的积极方面可能会扣掉一部分分数,所以这个写作做一个简单的梳理过程,所有同学考完了就是说,包括我们在这个事情前,下一届的同学要听课的时候要注意的事情,一个作文想得到高分,并不是说不能用模板,而是这个模板如何跟我们这个课题结合到一起。

  How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a
terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy
that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street. Anxious
passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the
street is filled with too many private cars。

  这次除了作文以外,阅读理解还是有点奇葩的,他导致了我们的文章题目都是这边是文章右边是题目,这次我们阅读理解第一篇讲的是西班牙皇权体制的结束,一开始用这样的文章给你来个下马威,很多同学一下子找不到方向了,这次面对媒体关于偷大家的信息这个东西是不是正确,然后还有数据正确等等,这样的话题都是比较少见的话题,所以这次阅读理解对大家分数有点影响。还有新题型,考的是七选五的题型比方说利用我们最常选项,数据、指代词这些方法去解读就可以了地我们这次翻译题又是来自于一本专著,它的英文名叫做AnOutline
of American
History,叫美国历史纲要,很多人一听到这个书名就说老师完了,跟我们2013年考的花园的那偏文章几乎是如出一辙,但是这次五道题难度上还是比较小的,比方说像今年的第一道题目说Thismovemnet,impelled,原文是impelled,而我们怕这个impelled单词不认识,改成了叫做driven,所以应该说难度上你可以发现帮你进行了很好的修改过程。第一句话主要考察的是中间逗号是个插入语部分,然后用了一个主语是thismovemnet,谓语动词是built,宾语是nation,后面and考虑并列结构,然后又出来and
shaped,后面是我们句子的宾语,第一个考下来就是插入语和我们所说的并列结构过程。第二句话仍然考的是我们并列,而且里面还考了定语从句,定语从句有个单词叫modified,这个单词大家一定认识,这个单词我们在课堂上反复强调过它,而且我们在最后的压题班还提到过这个单词,独特的或者是非常有特点的意思,或者是明确的。48题,仍然考虑是一个并列结构,就次出题者似乎对并列结构特别关心特别在意,那么49题考的仍然是定语从句和我们的比较级概念。最后第50题考的仍然是我们的定语从句和并列结构,所以这一次的其实整个的我们翻译题主攻就是我们的并列我们的定语从句,然后里面考了一些特殊词或者考察方式,虽然来自于历史学的专著,但是句子结构上并不是负责复杂,所以大家还是可以做出比较理想的分数,整体来这次我们考研[微博]英语如果说阅读上,可能就是因为第一篇文章题材上的一个下马威,虽然很多同学一下子找不到方向了,整体来说包括这次像我们的写作我们的翻译题还有我们的新题七选五难度上应该还是可以的,阅读理解上可能开始整个心理上的影响,导致做起来可能会有点慌,但是如果捋清楚顺序的话,还是比较容易实现的,所以通过这次考试我们可以看出来,我们出题者一直在遵循这以前的出题方式。因此对于2016年的同学老师我想提出几个建议,第一个写作,你可以注意到现在的写作不会去考察最热点的话题,也不会去考察生僻的话题,所以多关注生活当中比较常见的话题是什么,而且这次的写作会告诉大家,你看我在这次12月20号考完四六级之后,在我的微信上发了一个四六级的里面的指引,提到两个话题,第一个是读书的问题,第二个是科技跟生活的影响,所以建议所有的考研同学一定要对我们四六级的真题要去关注他,因为他们之间是有附带的连带关系,虽然不是同一个出题组,但是有指引。

  Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With
the number of private cars increasing, traffic jams in metropolitans are
bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring
much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the
environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance
in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do
nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted
on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars has
increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which
has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

  那么通过我们的阅读理解还有我们的翻译题,你会看到出题者不完全把话题限制在了我们的教育和经济上面,好像慢慢把话题扩展开来,题材上有所增加,但是整体难度上应该还是可以的,所以希望通过大家平时的时候多看一些外刊,老师希望所有同学如果已经考完的同学就不要在纠结于这次考试目前什么状况,一定要记好了你没有你想的那么差,所以请所有同学踏踏实实的去准备后面的考试,好好准备我们复试和调剂的内容,这样的话一定能够很好的去迎接成功的到来,能够迎接录取通知书的到来,对于没有考的同学要做好一件事情,什么事情?从基础抓起,不要抓那些生僻的晦涩的东西,一定记好了考研考的是真真事实具体能力的展示。好,这个就是我们考研英语一的这一次考试的一个解析的过程。(来源:海天教育)

  Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the
traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars should
be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public
transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon
transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can
have a smooth transportation。

 

  、

  人生处处面临选择

  范文1:  

  This simple picture represents a situation that every person must
face:

  when approaching a junction, which direction should one
choose?   

  Most viewers can empathize with the sense of hesitation and
uncertainty embodied in such an image. Without exception, everyone has
to make choices in life, whether they concern school, career, or love.
While some choices are simple, one cannot avoid the task of making
difficult decisions.  

  Choices are often directly related to one’s happiness. University
students, for example, face a hard and crucial decision upon graduating.
Many students have difficulty deciding whether to continue studying or
begin developing a career. Every individual is different, and one must
take the factors of one’s personal life into consideration. In addition
to an awareness of specific circumstances, however, making the right
choice also depends on correct appraisal of oneself。

  In order to choose correctly, therefore, one must be both realistic
and self aware. Furthermore, once having made a decision, one should
seriously accept and pursue the path one has chosen, and strive towards
the realization of one’s goal with spirit。

  范文2: In the picture we can see a man standing at a crossroad
with two similar roads, and trying to decide which way to take. In daily
life we are often faced with such choices. More often than not, we have
to make cardinal decisions independently. This moment is very important
for everyone to go through.  

  In order to make a decision that we will not regret, we should bear
these two principles in mind: thinking before acting, and never missing
any opportunities that arise. On one hand, we should have an apparent,
objective judgment about ourselves while maintaining a clear idea about
the world around us. On the other hand, we should also think about
opportunity. Many people may not quite agree with this and think that
opportunity is so rare that only the luckiest people come across it.
However, opportunity is open to everyone and one should make good use of
it when confronted with it. One should take advantage of it just like
the proverb states: “Opportunities are only from the prepared minds。”

  So when one is faced with choices the next time, remember that using
the mind and taking advantage of good opportunities will pave the way to
success。

  人生成功

  What is success? Different people hold different views on this
question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal
of money. Others argue that success means holding an important
government post. Still others believe that whoever has got a high
academic title is successful. It is clear that there are quite different
opinions on success。

  In order to become successful, you should first of all be both
perseverant and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are
always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you
should never lose heart. On the contrary, you must build up your
confidence and work even harder. You should always keep in mind that
perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In
addition, you should pay great attention to you work method. It is
necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the
efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along
well with you co-workers, care for each other and help each other. If
you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable
success in the future。

  In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one’s
work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of
the country and bringing happiness to the people。

  人生没有笔直的路

  范文1:  

  In the black and white drawing above, a youth gravely contemplates a
narrow winding path heading into a forest. Perhaps he thinks that his
own future may be much like this path; full of bends and curves, thorns
and traps. The road to success is never anything but uneven and
difficult.  

  In fact, one could even say that the more successful one’s life is,
the more problems and hardships one must have overcome. The ability to
work through difficult situations and unfortunate events only makes one
stronger and more capable. Given that the road to happiness always
contains obstacles and setbacks, we should be well prepared for the
hardships that life inevitably brings, and abandon the idea that life is
smooth or easy. We must accept the fact that failures are unavoidable,
whether they are failures in examinations, in finding a job, or carrying
out a task. People who accept that their life will not always be simple
or calm are better able to handle problems when they arise. Those who
are upset by each and every small setback — and there are many people
with such attitudes— do not have much potential. Failure is mother to
success as it can strengthen one’s will. Those who can draw lessons from
failure are destined for success。

  范文2:  

  It is everyone’s wish to have things go their way. Yet the journey
through life is not always the case and we should be prepared for the
twists and turns it offers us. This is certainly the case as shown in
the cartoon.  

  Twists and turns are a part of life and setbacks often happen. For
many reasons, we often have to encounter failure in a complex society.
No one can avoid or escape these unexpected changes in our daily lives;
however, failure may be a route toward success. This causes us to
reflect about what happened and as a result we build up and accumulate
experience. We are then more likely to come up with a possible solution,
and so twists and turns can turn into treasures. Edison, for instance,
the inventor of the electric light bulb, made hundreds of models that
failed before he came up with the right one. In general it is failure
that encourages us to work harder which eventually leads to success.  

  Twists and turns in life are unavoidable and are not always bad. We
should have a more optimistic view on life and try to make the most of
it and draw lessons from the bumps and turns along the way。

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